Reworking My Style (It Never Ends)

Here's another version of "Alison" or "My Aim is True." My original sketch was in bubble gum pink, and after showing it to my illustrator-friend, Lisa Adams, who I often rely on for art direction, I decided to go back to the original color scheme. Does it work? Is it too busy now? Is the peachy orange version better? I've looked at this one for too long, so I'll leave it be. Time to move on.